I like the first shot, though I might have straighten the shot to level the window and floor. Love the colours on the second one. the background off the portrait is annoying specifically the line running through her head and the pronounced shadow, but the rest is great. Love the moon shot.
For #1, I'm assuming you shot in a doorway? If so, the shot would have been more effective if you could have backed out a bit and shot the room with the doorway in the frame--it feels, and I never thought I'd say this, too tight. #2 works, but the crop is off a bit, unless of course you dig the angle and I would have loved to see that window not blown out. The portrait is good as well, although the shadow distracts a bit from it even though she is easy on the eyes.
Thanks Guys Means a lot to get some input. @WhisperWolf Yes the line where the wall meets the ceiling is deffenetly annoying i know, this is whatt happens when you are not thinking about the backround @Vers The doorway in #1 was so close to the wall that there was no way to back off, I only had the 18-55 with me at the time, Since then I have bought the 10-20mm sigma witch will help me in close spaces like this. And I know they are a litle crooked, the lines in the house (walls, ceiling and even the floor a lil bit) were all over the place, and the angle defenetly exaggerate that, I could have done a litle better job at hiding it You'r just gona have to travel to Iceland to figure that out haha
In #2 the window trim is parallel to the wall to its far right, so while the house my not be entirely plumb/square from wall to wall, the room in #2 looks pretty close. Just out of curiosity did you use a tripod for the interiors?
OK, good. Focus on squaring your shot next time around and if you don't already, try to use mirror lockup for longer exposures (<1/60), a shutter release cable is also a good idea. Hope that helps
I own a shutter release cable, handy little things, used it with the moonshot. And I just read about how mirror lockup works on wiki, never realised it could be used to reduce vibration Thanks for the Tips! *edit* Thanks Tranc3
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