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  1. AW3K

    AW3K What's a Dremel?

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    AW3K

    this is for an assignment i'm doing for college.

    all html was done in notepad,

    please tell us what u think

    any comments etc etc welcome

    cheers

    AW3K
     
  2. bradford010

    bradford010 Bradon Frohman

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    The site looks good. Maybe look at getting a little more CSS in there. I usually go for darker text on a lighter background, but this is a design issue and ultimately comes down to personal taste.

    What college u at?
     
  3. kanuslupus

    kanuslupus Minimodder

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    Perhaps a problem with my browser, but no images load. The "home" link brings up a 404 error.

    A little difficult to tell the layout, but doesn't look too bad from what I can see.

    Obviously personal preference, but I find the light blue text on white background awkward.
     
  4. AW3K

    AW3K What's a Dremel?

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    cheers m8

    i'm at wakefield college , where u at?

    AW3K
     
  5. AW3K

    AW3K What's a Dremel?

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    what browser u using m8?

    all the images work fine for me so i dunno about that,

    i think i might change the text colour but i like it :)

    Cheers

    AW3K
     
  6. AW3K

    AW3K What's a Dremel?

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    what sort of download time does it have for the non cable users?

    AW3K
     
  7. bradford010

    bradford010 Bradon Frohman

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    Educated ghetto style. used to be BICC, now Teeside Uni.

    Everything works fine 4 me in Explorer btw. What course is this for? I always just do enough work to get a good grade. If I then have time, anything else is just gravy.
     
  8. kanuslupus

    kanuslupus Minimodder

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    I'm using Mozilla 0.9.9
     
  9. AW3K

    AW3K What's a Dremel?

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    it's

    AVCE in ICT Year 2

    i try and aim for the top mark on all my assignments

    i've got 3 to do in 7 days lol oh what fun :D
     
  10. kanuslupus

    kanuslupus Minimodder

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    I begrudgingly loaded IE and everything works. Looks pretty good.

    1 question... did you intend the front page to be mostly italicized? I just noticed that on others, there were less italics.
     
  11. AW3K

    AW3K What's a Dremel?

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    whats that i've never heard of that?

    or am i just behind times?

    Later

    AW3K
     
  12. AW3K

    AW3K What's a Dremel?

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    well erm no but it dun look too bad does it? or should i change it?
    Cheers

    AW3K
     
  13. kanuslupus

    kanuslupus Minimodder

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    Mozilla is the free version of Netscape. The current version of Netscae is built around Mozilla.
    Not perfect yet, but I really hate Microsoft. Avoid it when I can.
     
  14. kanuslupus

    kanuslupus Minimodder

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    Again, it is personal preference. Though I think it is a generalized understanding that
    italics are not as easy to read. Consider reading a few hundred pages of italicized script.

    Also, depends on what exactly you are being graded for. I think it *might* be considered
    a mark against readability.

    Forgot to mention, www.mozilla.org for the browser if you are interested.
     
  15. vivid

    vivid down in fraggle rock

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    nice site

    i like the menu down the side, it looks very proffesional :dude:
     
  16. AW3K

    AW3K What's a Dremel?

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    good point m8 i think i better alter it.

    i wonder y non og the images work in it then?

    AW3K
     
  17. CrOaKeR

    CrOaKeR Host warrior 4, Vengence!

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    n1 m8,
    Like that Lian floppy mod, very neat :baby:
     
  18. AW3K

    AW3K What's a Dremel?

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    cheers m8

    it might be neet but it might also be useless unless i can find a mitsumi floppy drive :eeek:

    i cut the plate then tried changing the led and burnt the connector right off the board so the drive dun wanna work now :eeek: :sigh: :blush: :cries: :grr:

    i'm gonna look next week for a new drive , if push comes to shove i'll have to rob the mitsumi in my old machine but i don't want to do that.

    later

    AW3K

    never noticed till now that i am a Supermodder
    :dude: :dude: :dude:
     
  19. Alaric

    Alaric code assassin

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    well its absolutly destroyed in NN4... no images and 404 on every link on menubar :rolleyes:
    okish in opera6
    i think the text on the menu button is slightly small... and i'm on a bigger res than normal, but then thats me

    "Lia-Li PC60USB Aluminum Case" spelling error/typo on the lian li page

    not sure about the grfx at all tbh... especially one at top... which looks strange especially when centre fram is scrolled

    your contact form would be better as a serverside script rather than email... easier to collate data

    I don't see the point for the right frame ... when all it has is two buttons in... they could go under the menu

    i'm not gonna pick at the source tho cause i can't be bothered

    not convinced by the 'standard' table border on the maplin list page... would be nicer with a solid one and alternating row colours of slightly differing shades to easy reading

    i too don't like the blue on grey bg... darker text would be preferable

    there are empty rows at the end of the links section... don't like that... wasteful

    ditto on the PC page... and the inconsistent table widths on PC page

    having said i wasn't going to go into source i noticed a few center tags missing closing tags at least on the front page

    some images are quite larger... and bandwidth strangling for 56k, would be better thumbnailed and linked to larger ones.

    corners would be nicer smoothed out... bit too harsh imho


    otherwise (apart from source things i couldn't be bothered with) thats it... or untill i get bored later and critique a bit more ;)

    not tooooo bad tho
    it conveys what you need anyway
    and i've said it b4 but nice lianli mods :)
     
  20. cderalow

    cderalow bondage master!

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    to quote the gf "oooh thats a pretty blue" i was thinking it was too bright..... but who knows (should mention gf is blonde)
     

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