No video card? Nice job for your first though, better than mine, but then that was 6 years ago with hardware from 2001 lol. Actually, i disagree. That bit of black on the top ties in nicely with the bit of black on the FC.
I admit that overall it does require some tweaking, some of which I will look at tomorrow. But I tend to agree that the little bit of black does not really spoil the overall effect. It was a first attempt and I would probably do things differently but hopefully I have learnt from this project.