Personal Statement - Computer Science

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  1. Bonzo45

    Bonzo45 Ex CPC

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    Hey All

    I will be shortly sending off my UCAS application to my chosen Unis:

    Imperial || Bristol || Southampton || (Birmingham) || (?)

    I'm currently working on my Personal Statement. I would really appreciate it if you could give me some advice on what I currently have, or anywhere where I could improve it. If you don't want to read the whole thing (and why would you??) even looking at a paragraph and giving your comments would help.

    All points welcomed - Thanks,
    Sam
     
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  2. Fod

    Fod what is the cheesecake?

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    Wait, you applied to Imperial and not UCL? WHAT. IS. WRONG. WITH. YOU.
     
  3. Bonzo45

    Bonzo45 Ex CPC

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    I haven't applied yet! Also - care to elaborate?
     
  4. Jimbob94

    Jimbob94 What's a Dremel?

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    Very good, interesting, informative and gives a real impression of you (a good one!) :thumb:
     
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  5. mars-bar-man

    mars-bar-man Side bewb.

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    Okay, I would say put your interests below the A-Level subjects, and when I was skimming through, you appear to use "allowed" a fair bit, and it stood out to me. Here's a template our college lecturers gave us when we applied:

    Hope it helps, and good luck with the applications.
     
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